This is my third time re-reading this and i'm still cant move on and i'm still crying cuz ryan died like i know this is my third time but i cant really, i really love this, this my favorite one not gonna lie but its true cuz this is the one that i first read tbh,, and lucaon and kyon like i wanna have them in another series like i just cant u know,,
I’m honestly quite impressed at how the author could make the characters so despicable. Toxic seme and irritating uke. The only good part of this story were the side characters. There weren’t even any development as to how or when they fell in love with each other. It just happened out of the blue. Very poorly written. Don’t waste your time on this.
Sex scenes are hot. As for the story, it had an interesting plot. But somewhere near the ending, the author got lost and only focused on the romance instead. The romance had an open end. All in all, I was not satisfied with the ending.
**This review contains spoilers** Okay... I really just didn’t enjoy the main couple. Aside from the fact that the uke had the weakest personality until halfway through, their relationship just didn’t make sense. Hella abuse and rape, then all of a sudden the seme loves him?? Fuck no. They lacked emotional development and chemistry. It was such a turn off. If the story was based on the side couples tho I’d prolly give it a 3/5 instead. MAYBE. Most people really like the store tho so idk maybe it just wasn’t for me. I forced myself to finish just so I could see what happened at the end
I really can't take seme's behavior anymore. He really sucks I'm just sorry for the uke constantly and because of that the smutty scenes are not even enjoyable. A waste of time.
Not sure if this is a truly happy ending because the relationship is immortal x mortal and that shit always hurts. BUT! the character development is interesting and the way they fall in love together is a bit rough and angsty but gets very sweet. I laughed out loud at some point.
They are basically vampires. I don't like how the story ended, I feel like they were rushing the ending. We didn't get to see them say goodbye to Ryan and we didn't get to see Kristoff get what he deserves. I wish they could have found an antidote and more of the story could have had a more dramatic ending. The sex is okay when he wasn't borderline raping him. It wasn't well constructed but it was a good plot.
OoO Ogaping mouth right now, that was great! But what was up with that closure? Not a good one. All the loose ends never got tied and all the tangles were left in the fray. If only there were more to explain what was really going on and Ryan's death wasn't in vain contrary to it being due to "old age".