The story was alright for what it is. It was an interesting take on a bara bl for me. Usually i read bara with guys that are approximately the same height and build. Personly, the seme was way to aggressive and i really disliked how he kept calling the uke "a woman" or "his woman", and the whole "make my woman fit my taste" is crap. I felt the seme was just belittling the uke the whole time. I was happy fit the two of them at the end, but there was no growth other than dicks.
I think the artwork could have been a little better. There were points where it felt like there was too much toner and a little too much exaggeration on the penis. I've heard that there are some crazy sized penises out there, but i just felt it was too exaggerated for the mc's body size. I did like how the characters looked throughout the whole story. Sometimes you'll find a few proportional discrepancies with the hands or face compared to the body, but there weren't any.
I've already read this somewhere else, and it was cute. At first chapter, Kumadera had some disturbing personality...but as I read on, it appears it was the typical old ways of thinking. Good thing that at the end, it showed some sort of progress on that certain aspect of his character.
........Seme was..... I mean he’s getting better throughout the story, and I love the premise of this, but I was just so bothered by how he kept calling him a woman. Despite this I really like this story. It’s hella refreshing. Honestly this is a 9/10 just for dodging every cliche and stereotype out there lmao