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i wouldn't say the story sucked but could have been better. your last comment was hilarious tho
"Besides two dark hairs in a yaoi rarely ever get together, this relationship won't last at all."
Truer words have never been spoken
LOL. So...their realtionship will fall apart not because the seme is a jerk, but because teo dark haired people are nit supposed to get together in yaoi. XD wonderful
The first story sucked. In the end the seme didn't have to work for the Uke at all, the uke just fell in love with him. The whole time the uke is strong and not giving in but no he somehow falls in love and they make up some stupid reason for it. There is no reason! He was being held hostage against his will. If I hated my father and I do like hell I would ever talk to him, sure I'd go and tell him to "F off!" and then I'd walk out on the seme and tell him the same thing and make him crawl if he wanted me so badly.
Besides two dark hairs in a yaoi rarely ever get together, this relationship won't last at all.