The idea of the story wasn't that bad. But a few things bother me way above the poor storytelling. 1. Miyabi trying to kill Takashi because Hiroshi said that he would sacrifice himself to save Takashi. Wouldn't kill Takashi defeat the whole purpose of saving Hiroshi???? Miyabi sure had some screws lose 2. The bunny was never explained 3. Hiroshima was also never explained. At times he seemed the narrator and in love with Takashi but this was never addressed and the OTP seemed to be Konome and Takashi. I'm sure I could find some more things, but those are the ones on top of my head.
The idea of the story wasn't that bad. But a few things bother me way above the poor storytelling.
1. Miyabi trying to kill Takashi because Hiroshi said that he would sacrifice himself to save Takashi.
Wouldn't kill Takashi defeat the whole purpose of saving Hiroshi???? Miyabi sure had some screws lose
2. The bunny was never explained
3. Hiroshima was also never explained. At times he seemed the narrator and in love with Takashi but this was never addressed and the OTP seemed to be Konome and Takashi.
I'm sure I could find some more things, but those are the ones on top of my head.