Challenge for the Day

I would make akihito"s body more manly, I will make him fight all the rapists except asami

More ambigous Aki! (⊙…⊙ )

Asami, I would make him less hypermasculine and less "rapey" because honestly that can be annoying sometimes. Also teach him how to bottom sometimes sheesh.

I would change the way Asami 'punished' Akihito in that fateful first chapter. Less drugs, bondage, catheter and film roll humiliation please Asami - you naughty boy! I am well aware that psychologically Akihito (or anyone for that matter!) would not be able to really bounce back from that so easily - and it's always kind of bugged me. In a way it's a shame that this encounter had been the base for which everything else has developed. That's it!

I like this one! I wold add that I would have him kick sexual harassers in the balls too.

I would make them saying "I love you" during sex ... They didn't say it at all while they do soo much

I don't think my heart could take it!

I liked Rommy's too,

Fei needs a hair trim

Less "rapey"!! This made me laugh!!

I like this new solution: more ambiguous Aki, less rapey Asami and seeing him bottoming and treating Aki as an equal. Our Aki derserves it.

Asami quits smoking (and Akihito torments him while he is going through withdrawal) and both verbalizing their feelings more.

I would make Aki learn from his mistakes and be a little harder to victimize. I'm sure he'd still get into trouble, but the bad guys would have to work harder to get the better of him.

These are great responses!

This is very true, I did have quite the 'face palm' moment when Akihito got outwitted by the old roofie in the drink trick! Who takes a drink from some mystery blonde in a shady club that belongs to your arch nemesis?! Though I think it would be weird to see a wizened, mature Akihito. Nice! - But weird (≧∀≦)

Would be fun to turn them into vampires ...

She wasn't a mystery blonde. Akihito knew exactly who she was and in his mind, she was a victim. Why on earth would he connect someone he considered a victim with a devious crime lord with a history of raping him? Armchair quarterbacking.

A vamp. culture under the guise of yakuza mob war. Source of the dispute what is a true Vamp. (the cont. drinking of human blood) A split has ocurred in the comm. of vamp. and some are calling for and outright ban on the practice(Takaba A) others don't want it stopped at all, wanting all bans lifted, even suggesting those that call for banning it are not real vamps. Half bloods(Takaba) are a blight. jpn. human pop. has fallen Takaba is not willing to let the vamps have their way Is war on the way?

I agree I wouldn't want him wizened or even mature--just a bit more street smart.

Well, I would--but I would have noticed right away she wasn't a victim there.
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