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"Merci beaucoup", gambarimas :)=
You say you are not a mangaka, but if not, who was the artist who drew the pictures for your story?
Bonsoir, :) Hi !
The mangaka is now : Chimikii :3
Her blog : http://www.deviantart.com/newest/?section=&global=1&q=chimikii
Thank you, niesly Mikado, for being brave enough to put your artwork out there for instant reaction and criticism. I hope you find enough encouragement to continue.
I did find the story a little hard to follow. I got that there is a war going on between two enemy forces. I'm not sure where and when the war happens in relationship to the main character, who I assume is Face. Is it in the past, present, or future? I mean, this question needs to be answered in the context of the story, which is only a few pages long so far.
Good luck.