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I feel like the ending was rushed. Is it just me? Disappointing considering the overall to...

Fuggy July 30, 2017 2:01 am

I feel like the ending was rushed. Is it just me? Disappointing considering the overall tone of the story, and how well paced it was. I have no problem with MC dying, its how rushed it happened :(

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    kaye July 30, 2017 5:00 am

    right, were not even that sure if it really was him, get it?

    Ihloni July 30, 2017 8:53 am

    Yeah I agree with you :( I expected a lot more of this story. The pace was slow, so a ending of 31 pages in one chapter doesn't suit the story's pace at all ...
    (Sorry for my english)

    kaye July 30, 2017 9:48 am

    no probs, but this might really be the end like just some kind of De Javu and barely made it? AnywY Yeah.

    Bloodberry July 30, 2017 9:49 am

    But it show it is still ongoing and not completed?

    kaye July 30, 2017 9:50 am

    *might not be the end.
    sorry it's night here and dark so it's kinda hard to see, not that I memorizes the keyboard's letters ordrly.

    Fuggy August 21, 2017 5:31 am
    *might not be the end.sorry it's night here and dark so it's kinda hard to see, not that I memorizes the keyboard's letters ordrly. kaye

    NOPE ITS DEFINITELY DONE GUYS

    kaye August 21, 2017 11:10 pm
    NOPE ITS DEFINITELY DONE GUYS Fuggy

    Well I guess there's no helping it, It's the Author's decision.
    This is it.

    Fuggy August 22, 2017 5:06 am
    Well I guess there's no helping it, It's the Author's decision.This is it. kaye

    Yeah, unfulfilling. But it was a good read all around