The fact that the seme had his eye on this kid since he was a gradeschooler is off-putting. Then he ADOPTS him and rapes him the first night he's under the same roof? Yeah, not one of sensei's shining moments imo.
yeah, I felt this story had a lot of potential, but was super rushed.
I couldn't understand the seme's or the uke's feeling very well. it was like watching a crime drama, you know someone will die (normally one of the 1st people shown), finding out who the culprit is without how or why the crime was committed.
it didn't help it was one ch. of 18 pages.
So from what I understood the dad and brother didn't care for the youngest (?) son (uke) and basically sold him off. Then a blast to the past where a party celebrating the marriage of the new step mom (she's only mentioned we don't know her persona or other details) and then the kid is in his room (younger version of uke) and when a subordinate (the future seme) come into the room to bring the kid back to which the kid arrogantly implies his status as president's son {I thought he (Uke) was very arrogant} and the subordinate makes a promise to the kid and stay ?friends? (more like lord/ servant relations)....
it was way too short, I don't really have a problem with age gaps, but I like to learn more about the characters or have time to fall in love with the characters enough to care, but I couldn't do that here. it felt empty, the story was there but like a crappy documentary it generalized the story too much that it became 'false' misunderstood.
Seme saved uke from a rapist only to turn around and pressure uke into unwanted sex with him. What a hero :/