First: I just read the "epilogue" or the specials, and I think it was what I needed, more depth in the relationship. But also, still, they need to communicate A LOT MORE.
Second: SPOILERS ---> the baby is super cute <3. The birth moment was adorable and so well done. And when he is swimming with the floaty, soo cute.
Third: I love Moran. She's a good friend. The MC really needs that.
...Also, the GPS thing, the tracker thing, and all of that... weird.
There’s more chapters after the vacation
Yeah, i know :) theyre not up yeat, so we have to wait ^_^
yet***
I really enjoyed the art style. But the story, for me, feels a little rushed. They went from "I would never date anyone, much less you" to "We're married." And I get it's for the baby (who's super cute and adorable), but... idk. It feels like, without sex, they wouldn't be able to have a conversation for more than 3 minutes.
Maybe, for me, it needed more transitional chapters between the end or the beginning of their romantic relationship to the marriage and the baby being born.
Also, I know both of them are really into sex, but the fact that the MLI keeps going when the MC said no sat the wrong way with me. Again, the MC liked it, but the fact that this situationship happens so often... still, weird for me.
Still, cute and well done.