If you haven’t read this imagine it’s a story about the terrors of being married and impregnated to a hood nigga with a high sex drive. But no on a serious note I hate it good art is the ONLY thing this story has going it fails to build the world around the characters it feels one dimensional and he rapes her continuously I really hate the chapter where she’s trying to explain how she feels he tells her I’m tired of this lay down and take your panties off while she’s pregnant w his kid. Second gripe he doesn’t care about the children he’s continuously rough during sex doesn’t care if she wants it or not and when she brings up miscarriage he says oh we can always have another one…. Third gripe the story is inconsistent one chapter she was skinny asf then the next pregnant asf during sex with no evident time skip so it makes you feel like the author is speeding through plot Fourth gripe I don’t even know why she loves him this feels like Stockholm syndrome he was the only person to show her she had a choice in life so she felt like he was something special but she had a whole other man who would’ve done the same thing she just didn’t explore that bc she felt like her mom was forcing it when actually maybe her mom was being selfish but her mom also knew what it was like to marry a gangster being worried 24/7 being in danger 24/7 I don’t think she was wrong to want different for her daughter. Fifth gripe she always says ohhh growing up I hated being the gangster child it severely impacted my friendships and school life then actively lets the whole gang come up to juho’s school as if people weren’t looking around weirdly also when she had jiho we didn’t even see him until he was a fucking 6-7 month old lmao My last problem is the obsession with sexual activity with or around children I find it highly weird to have sex with your husband while BREAST FEEDING YOUR BABY and he has absolutely no problem “fucking” her in front of the children he’s honestly a terrible dad if the children died he’d probably say we can create more but for some odd reason she thinks it’s endearing basically she’s a weak woman like she’s been all her life she thinks she chose this man but she didn’t in the end it was still a decision made by one of her parents which she complained about the whole story
If you haven’t read this imagine it’s a story about the terrors of being married and impregnated to a hood nigga with a high sex drive.
But no on a serious note I hate it good art is the ONLY thing this story has going it fails to build the world around the characters it feels one dimensional and he rapes her continuously I really hate the chapter where she’s trying to explain how she feels he tells her I’m tired of this lay down and take your panties off while she’s pregnant w his kid.
Second gripe he doesn’t care about the children he’s continuously rough during sex doesn’t care if she wants it or not and when she brings up miscarriage he says oh we can always have another one….
Third gripe the story is inconsistent one chapter she was skinny asf then the next pregnant asf during sex with no evident time skip so it makes you feel like the author is speeding through plot
Fourth gripe I don’t even know why she loves him this feels like Stockholm syndrome he was the only person to show her she had a choice in life so she felt like he was something special but she had a whole other man who would’ve done the same thing she just didn’t explore that bc she felt like her mom was forcing it when actually maybe her mom was being selfish but her mom also knew what it was like to marry a gangster being worried 24/7 being in danger 24/7 I don’t think she was wrong to want different for her daughter.
Fifth gripe she always says ohhh growing up I hated being the gangster child it severely impacted my friendships and school life then actively lets the whole gang come up to juho’s school as if people weren’t looking around weirdly also when she had jiho we didn’t even see him until he was a fucking 6-7 month old lmao
My last problem is the obsession with sexual activity with or around children I find it highly weird to have sex with your husband while BREAST FEEDING YOUR BABY and he has absolutely no problem “fucking” her in front of the children he’s honestly a terrible dad if the children died he’d probably say we can create more but for some odd reason she thinks it’s endearing basically she’s a weak woman like she’s been all her life she thinks she chose this man but she didn’t in the end it was still a decision made by one of her parents which she complained about the whole story