The only bad thing about this story is that it forces the +18 non-con or dub-con scenes which really feel unnecessary after 1 or 2 times bc the plot of the story is already good enough without including those scenes but sometimes I try not to be too picky about it because some authors confess that their own companies force them to include those scenes or they won't get work, it's something under contract... I suppose some authors don't care much or they're really very hard-hearted to say "I'm not going to include those scenes in my work until I feel they're necessary". A good example of this was Paskim in Lost in the Cloud, many fans kept insisting and practically ordering her to do +18 extras but she refused and good for her, nobody has the right to force you!
The only bad thing about this story is that it forces the +18 non-con or dub-con scenes which really feel unnecessary after 1 or 2 times bc the plot of the story is already good enough without including those scenes but sometimes I try not to be too picky about it because some authors confess that their own companies force them to include those scenes or they won't get work, it's something under contract... I suppose some authors don't care much or they're really very hard-hearted to say "I'm not going to include those scenes in my work until I feel they're necessary". A good example of this was Paskim in Lost in the Cloud, many fans kept insisting and practically ordering her to do +18 extras but she refused and good for her, nobody has the right to force you!