I don't like very much the art-style (they look too girly, both of them) but well... and it's very short. Not one of the best I've read, definitely, but it is smutty.
Cute. The sex was genuine. Shion wanted to see the Nezumi who's on stage. Shion was worried for Nezumi when the latter fainted so he hugged him tightly. >< They both genuinely called each other beautiful. <33
lacking something, but nothing directly wrong with it. the sex scene wasn't quite "erotic" like what seems to have been intended since it deliberately excludes the points of intimacy...at least it's one of the few where it shows they have sex?
So this was okay in my opinion, fairly short smut scene. I wasn't a huge fan of the art style, but I can't say I dislike it. I feel like it was a little OOC also. Overall though it wasn't bad, just not good.