i really like the first two chapter, wished it would have continue with that flow. the thi...

i really like the first two chapter, wished it would have continue with that flow. the third chapter didn't feel like it ended- i felt incomplete. the last part seems to flow more with the first two chapter so it didn't really make any sense since the guy seems to have a complete personality change towards the end to the third chapter. all in all it was ok- not great and not bad, just ok