beta
There were 2 things that bother me the most in this story.
First he keeps calling her a pig and eventually she accepted it. I would not like that. Its not cute, its not funny is just faking not!
Second she looses all that weight and then in the end she is like never mind and just stabs herself in the back. All that progress for nothing.
I like that she is not jumping at the first show of affection or care, she is like "F you all motherfa****!" But by the spoilers it seems she takes that a little too literally. To be fair the dad is hot but piece of trash and I am hella confused. Might come back when it updates just see where this trash can on fire ends at. ╮(￣▽￣)╭