A spolied boy who's grandpa just died and he lives with other relatives that he supports thanks to his grandpa. The story shows this boy and interactions between new friends, one's his grandpa use to know, and how to express feelings and to relate to one another. It was alright, but kinda boring in some parts. Practically no romance.
6 chaps - You feel like your missing a back story or two, and time delininiations are not always clear, but it's a story with a lot of potential and it's a shame it's marked as "complete" when it clearly isn't.
It was ok, sort of hard to get into because the writing style read more like an early teenager had written it. Very random dialog. Anyway it wasn't bad, I liked the concept you were going after.
