EDIT I READ COMMENTS; MFS REALLY TEARED UP FROM THIS WHATTTTT BRO THIS SHIT GOOFY AF. BIJ GOT HANDLED NY MEN LEFT N RIGHT WYM BRO TF.. GOOFFFFYYYYY MFFFFSSS
This reads like some fanfic right off fanfiction.net I feel like I've actually read something like this on that site (or maybe an original on fictionpress.net I can't remember.) The art is also atrocious. Besides the proportions, I skipped to the end and couldn't recognize the main characters. But other than that, what in the emo hell is this story? I skipped out when they got it on in a church and that ending makes no sense to me. If I could I'd share this with all the emo fanfic writers I used to follow back in the early 2010s (the ones who wrote straight smut at least), I'm sure they'd love it.
Honestly, comparing this to the other stories made by the same author, this one seems to have gotten the best response from the public, and it very much deserved it, the only thing I personally wish didn't happen, was the others coming in and aha- r**ing her essentially, but it's story was pretty good in my personal opinion, its not the best out there, but it isn't the worst either, it has just right amount, and if we could get a small continuation of a view into the future of them, and possibly with their own children would make it 100% better