CUUUUUTE WISH IT WAS LONGER IM SO SAD I FINISHED IT both of his partners are adorable and honestly i totally get him i would want both of them too lol Definitely a reread and goes to faves
it's a little complicated in the panels at parts as if they're not spread out far enough, like it could probably be 8 chapters instead of 5. it feels like the writing was very tightly packed basically. overall it's very sweet and nice. and lovely, I would have loved to seen a more drawn out story though with the individuals. Could've gotten some more backstory for all the individuals, between tatsumi and yoh, between asatoshi and sataoshi, get a spinoff for asatoshi. I'm glad it wasn't a love triangle and it ended up as a happy throuple, they also could've dived into that dynamic a bit more with some afterstory. Overall probably a 7 or 8/10 it's really good but could've been better with some better writing. the story wasn't bad at all though. Bathroom scene with tatsumi was also very rushed feeling.
i know this was very jambled im reading at 2 am and my thoughts are everywhere sorry if anyone actually reads this lmao
Very tightly packed, could've been spread out more; I feel like there could've been more chapters with more backstory, also a bit rushed but overall 8/10 would've been higher if not for the rushed and jumbled feeling.
both of his partners are adorable and honestly i totally get him i would want both of them too lol
Definitely a reread and goes to faves