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Older uke, older seme, deep voice x child voice, 5years gap, novelist, actor, students

1-Aishi no Sweet Voice
2-Sexy Cool Voice

the seme is a mf titan, a clossal titan

first uke looks like a lamp genie, duh

A young boy who has always hated his girlish voice meets a handsome and striking man with a captivating voice. They try to figure out their feelings while striving to realize their dreams in theater.

A young boy who has always hated his girlish voice meets a handsome and striking man with a captivating voice. They try to figure out their feelings while striving to realize their dreams in theater.

the art is fucking trash its like if i pooped in a fucking sorry what did i just disrespect my poo yueah no im not gonna do that so anyways this art sucks so bad that i wanna puke

the pacing could be better on both stories

Vol 1, Ch 5.5

I'm glad I did read this. It's cute and funny with a bit of smut on the side. Now on to the next part... "Sexy Cool Voice" LOLs

First story (first 3 chapters plus ch 0, the extra) is good. The whole voice thing is actually different and I enjoyed it a lot.

The second story pissed me off. Frankly, Taketo WASN'T being a brat. Satori was being the asshole.
1) It *doesn't* take much to say "welcome home." A few seconds at most, and even IF you're focused (which I get! I work from home too!), you know when he's getting home. Plan a break, say "welcome home" then go back to work.
2) If you've lost a week's worth of work without saving, that is YOUR FAULT, not his. OMFG why the hell would you not save like that? Geezus.
3) There was NO REASON to not explain EXACTLY wtf was going on with the illustrator. That's just begging to invite misunderstanding and jealousy. ANYONE faced with someone hanging all over your lover (a lover you can't even publicly claim) is going to piss someone off. Tell him to get off you, then tell your lover this guy is JUST the illustrator because you used your lover in the book. Taketo would have handled things a WHOLE lot better, kthxla~
Satori caused every damned bit of that then got pissed off at the other guy for doing exactly what pretty much anyone would do when faced with those situations. Seriously, 2/5.

Since I loved the first and give it a 5, so I'll let it go at 3.5 rounded up to 4.
But UGH that guy pissed me off.