Comments of Amber

I want a guy like him! Hahaha

Was weird and ma’am, she is a minor LMAO

The age gap is really big. Imagine dating someone as old as your parents. But then again it's fine since he isn't indulging her in a sexual relationship or what not.

Sweet but I don't quite agree realistically.

THAT WAS TOO SHORT

That last part won me over, too cute for words, really

That's cute but that was too much of a Father Complex I think.

The age gap is only a problem for me if the older person is indulging the younger in a sexual relationship, and that doesn't seem to be the case. I really loved that he wasn't some perv after a high schooler, but he fell for her because of who she is, not because she is young. This story is really one of the best oneshots I read. I loved everything about it. And that boy she rejected was so understanding, I'm really glad this story didn't need a villain.

Cute story about an overprotecting school girl and an oblivious writer.

I don't know which of them is cuter x)

It was cute and even though he was 40 he was hot but so was her dad...lol, looking past the age difference, this was a sweet oneshot. I wished there was more.

40 OMG but nice story..

suuper sweet ^^

Really fun to read a sweet. I love the guy's reaction at the end, so adorable

OMG!! I'd like a serialization of this!!! XDD