Usually I don't rate stories that are purely porn like this, but I found the uke so revolting. Take that lip gloss off, faggot. You a man. Be a man.
The concept's hot but I mean . . . I'm just not into the uke, so it doesn't matter. It's almost salt in the wound to have a man wearing lingerie just for said man to look like a fucking girl. You just got rid of half the appeal! I want a MAN in lingerie, not a boyish-looking woman. Just write het shit at that point like actually
Also, just saying, I didn't really think there was any chemistry between the characters. Nim is very much into Woo Ho, but it didn't feel like Woo Ho even noticed him, so him suddenly being so sexually aggressive kind of came out of nowhere. I feel like chemistry's extra important for porn so . . . Kinda failed on that front. Chop
