the most annoying couple in the whole fucking world. if i was hyun i would kill myself bro i would not be able to take it.... i think ligh hair fell in love way too fast. i tried to rationalize it in my head but im still a bit...... egh.... and why is dark hairs solution to everything to just ignore ligh haor. Hate him? Ignore. Dislike him? Ignore. Find him annoying? Ignore. Worried about him? Ignore. Like him? Ignore. Love him? Ignore. i dont wven know... how i feel about this. them as a couple they act like ,.... theyre like braindead bro. they were cuter afywr the timeskip but they were also so mich more annoying ?? why are they so annoying?? why do thry make me angry?? i tried to read this once before i tjink but i dropped it on like chapter 3 because i ddidnt think this couls go right. ar all. like. at the beginning. theyre so Hopeless?you read first chapter then last chapter They arent even the same people?????? Hello???? um..
WAHHHHHHHH THIS WAS SO GOOD AND SO CUTE SO WHOLESOME AND SO AMAZINGGGGGG I LOVED IT. It was a bit annoying when doyoung was ignoring jaeha, Jaeha was carrying that relationship . But I swear this has Crack in it why was it so good 8/10 06/05/2024
nice concept but unforch not fleshed out at all. sad bc i love a good rivals to lovers </3 story had potential 2 be great if it wasn't so rushed... why do the MCs develop feelings for each other soooo fkn quickly ?? like maybe let shit marinate a min or two
P: Seol Jaeha and Lee Hyun have been best friends since childhood. They do nearly everything together, and despite Jaeha’s unprecedented popularity at school, he only has eyes for Hyun. Enter the new transfer student (and Jaeha’s personal nightmare), Kim Doyoung. Hyun and Doyoung spend more and more time together every day, leaving less time for Jaeha to make his move. What’s worse, Doyoung is icing him out for some unknown reason, all while growing ever closer to Hyun. The two seemingly butt heads at every turn, and Jaeha simply cannot figure out why. The answer is simple: Doyoung sees Jaeha’s coy, flirtatious teasing of Hyun as bullying, and wants to protect his new friend. Their wires crossed, an unending cycle of misunderstandings and misfortunes between the rivals ensues; however, a fateful game of basketball just might spark something electric between them… O: They're so cute!
the first chapter i could not tell where this story was gonna go. a new student named doyoung comes to hyuns class, and jaeha is mistaken for a hully even though they are childhood best friends. jaeha has liked hyun since they were little but he is unfortunately straight. doyoung ends up having feelings for jaeha and after a time skip he buys him a promise ring
I'm still caught up on Lee Hyun. the parts that could be sad are written off as a joke, it makes sense as it's a romcom but I prefer for stories to have dramatic moments so I can really feel the light moments.
it feels like the author thought about what they wanted to happen but not about how to get there. the developments dont feel natural. it's cute though so whatever.
i feel like its a bit fast paced but its expected for a short story, it would've been great if it was a slowburn with the two's feelings developed more, but it was cute nonetheless!