Comments of Bed Room Tour

Collection of oneshots but all of them are boring

A couple of the stories have potential, but were way too short to be satisfying in any way. Also most of the stories were boring or trash. Not even the smut was very good. Just such a blah collection of stories.

During the last summer holiday of high school, Chinatsu, who has been scared of sex ever since he had his heart broken, decides to jump into the arms of Charles Yamazaki, who is said to be a Love Counsellor that can bring one out of one's pain no matter how terribly one's heart has been broken.

Chapter 6 was

I HATE CHAPTERS 3 & 6, because Chapter 3 the seme got his girlfriend pregnant even though the gf didn't want to give birth to the baby, next is Chapter 6 because it one is a single dad (the kid came from the ukes sperm btw)... I HATE THIS KINDS OF STORIES AAAGGGHHH PUNYETA TANG INA KADIRI

series of smutty fluff one-shots

ch. 1
good

ch.7
super kawaii

Histoires courtes c'est chiant

Decent enough, Theres sex so that's cool.

rread/rvw/tag

I enjoyed it!

1) Heartbreak bedroom tour! #New
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2) Blasé art teach x perverted-mouthed and refreshing student #Teacher x Student #Seme's PoV
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3) Student who'd do anything for the happiness of his traumatized best friend! #School Life #Close Friends #Girl Trauma
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4) "Even I, myself... hoped to bring even a few seconds of happiness to this hopeless guy, but... From the bottom of my heart, I wish I didn't pity him." #Student x Teacher #Messed Up student x Teacher
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5) Florist x Overly cute and lovesick customer! "Can our bodies count as a flower arrangement? Because I'm stuck inside..." #Deliveryman #Florist #Seme's PoV
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6) Lone and overworked single father x Childcare center sensei who knows what he wants! #Single parent #Daycare
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7) "I'm a #Proctologist : my work consist of putting my fingers into my patients' anuses. But I'm actually gay, so at night it's the reverse. I'm the one getting probed by my lover's fingers." #Couple

It is a collection of one shot. Some stories were cute.

all the stories are cute and fun and really sweet. great humor

PWP one-shots. first- heartbreak counselor- predictable, has some funny moments with hilariously non-committal ending. second- student teacher- this one is frenetic and almost jekyll-hyde-ish. third- is another whirlwind of nonsense- childhood friends hook up- one is scared of women, or maybe not? fourth- better writing but still sloppy- student x teacher- kid has a bad past and teacher is hoisted on his own petard. fifth- deliveryman x floral arranger- really? if it's already pwp, what does it matter if they start with the ass i guess. sixth- single fatherx daycare worker- has the most build up, but still ends after the hook-up with no resolution. seventh- proctologist and retail guy. kinda sweet- but really? a proctologist and you're not going to exploit that at all? all of these feel very rushed and half-baked- from the characters to the stories to the art.

I really liked this collection ! Some of the stories could be developed into full mangas ! Especially #4 and #6 ! Whew !

Chapter 4 was intense

ch4: te procurei até na casa do caralho. It's the one where the S seme exposes his teacher to other teacher, when she opens the curtain.