Comments of Between Love, Hate and Affection

Fantasy version of high school / college drama with paladins and demons and hormonal guys who won't communicate. I don't know how the demon system works here but they cant be that bad if they let the vice head of the paladin group marry one?

This threesome is not my thing.

everyone was so insanely hot

This one star is dedicated purely—and I mean purely—to the art. This has some genuinely phenomenal art, to the point that it's almost disappointing to see it used on such an ass story. There's such a blinding disconnect between the quality of the art and the quality of the writing.

For me, the biggest issue this story had was the fact that it's just not subtle. At all. So much of the story is spent on Risbel wondering why Kendon is acting weird after Risbel had his demon lapdog infest his dreams . . . And it's just so blatantly obvious that he's weird because he dreamed of Risbel. Like it's so obvious that it's almost frustrating to read. I don't find any enjoyment in dwelling on some half-baked emotional mystery that just isn't a mystery in the slightest. This is only ten chapters yet it felt too long. When the reader knows what's going on and the main character for whatever reason just isn't catching up, it's not enjoyable. It's frustrating.

I also thought the dynamic between essentially all characters just wasn't fleshed out enough. There's two main relationships going on, being Risbel & Robernia (the aforementioned demon) and Risbel & Kendon. While their dynamics aren't particularly bad, I did find them to be rather shallow, and that's easily attributed to the fact that this story simply isn't long enough to create a good, dynamic relationship between basically three people. They have the basics down but there's not enough room to really grow or explore these relationships in a way that feels meaningful and impactful, but especially amongst Risbel and Robernia.

Risbel and Robernia is especially annoying as they get a lot of focus together, but ultimately kind of don't amount to anything. Robernia just gets up and disappears at the end of the story after Kendon comes in and makes his move, so I'm left just thinking . . . "That's it?" The focus on their sexual relationship could have instead been shifted to further focus on Risbel and Kendon and to actually further develop and show the two of them together, as Robernia ends up being such a nothing character to me.

One last thing that's kind of annoying is that this story puts a lot of attention to sex, and the sex we do get is pretty hot . . . But it's barely there. It's like we get sprinkles of sex scenes instead of just full ones and it's kind of confusing? It's only ten chapters, and you already introduced the sex scenes, so why not put more focus on them and make the story some shameless smut? It's not like it has much to otherwise offer.

Sounds interesting enough i guess

normally i would b fine if the story ends once any conflicts have been resolved like how normal stories should really end tbh (i hate when things get dragged out),, but the ending for this got me “huh???? huh???” like,,, THAT WAS IT !?

What a disapointing end

It was GOOOOOOODDDDDDD kinda short but DAMMMMNNN

wait this is so hot what the guy looks like sampo
but the ending is abrupt and the side character a bit ugh

Wtf did i just read…

that wasnt an ending wtf

Nice art, the plot could have been better.

This whole thing was dumb and the uke was a freaking slut I only rated it a two star bc the art was pretty bros

This was a good read but idk man, not really got the feels..

So we didn't get them to fuck together? Seriously I want more.

i wanted some extras to further wrap things up
got edged but was a god read