a separate upload of the extras with better cropping! everything i said about the main story still applies, some of the writing is a bit rough around the edges and the plot exists solely to service fluffy lovey dovey moments, not drama. in regards to the upped age rating on this bad boy. the arts quite good but... i think the author hasn't quite mastered the art of pornography. i just don' find it satisfying from... that perspective. that said it's still a worthwhile read because of how fluffy and sweet everything is.
Haye