Wow! This was an atrocious read. Homeboy is the epitome of trash! He didn't realize his attraction (cuz it ain't love) for her until she changed (which is totally understandable because physicals do matter) and she was in a "committed relationship". What a loser! Its the fact that he thought that and still kissed her multiple times and basically harassed her into sleeping with him. and the dodo bird was too infatuated with him to notice how horrible he was. He also didn't even defend her when that toe infection with hair was insulting her. I'm also confused because how can you want someone else but be entertaining another woman who was your EX for that matter?! Make it make sense. There was literally no redeeming qualities in this. I couldn't even finish it. Throw it in the both of the incinerator.
It was sweet seeing the guy getting carried away at the wedding, but I would have enjoyed it more if it didn't have bed before vows. It wasn't needed for this plot.
