Comments of Blue Eyes (hoshino Lily)

Confused, lost, and wasted. Also, mc looks like a little boy falling in love with like a 30 year old man. Not my forte. I’m good thank you very much.

Feels unfinished

It had so much potential. It just didn't really gel for me. Still very sweet.

Confusing? I understand the concept, but it lacks... explanation? of the lore itself. Welp, it's a one shot.

hm... 4. Plot's similar to little mermaid, BL version.

It feels like there should be a continuation or something

I know there's more to this has to be hope someone will finish it.

It leaves so many questions... yet i love the art
feels like little mermaid. there was a moment i even question if he was a human who turned into a mermaid to save the guy thanks to the jewel... not the case but it could be interesting.

Kamigami no Namida is a seperate story that comes before this one, it explains the jewel and the whole selling mermaids thing. I think the first 2 color pages here are what happened after that "prequel"... So Nize was likely the friend from that other mermaid.

FINISHED: CH.0

A merman who loves a man and has to choose weather to stay a merman or become human.

Who tried to sell you?

No plot. Some attempt, but I guess this is more of a side story because there is no background. Also no smut. Just kissing

It was good I only wish it didn't feel like it was so incomplete!! I would read the story again if more came out. Chapter 0

A man and his merman. Lovely interpretation.

feels hurried

feels incomplete because it is- apparently there are more chapters-both before and after- i think, that are not scanlated here. the merpeople were very pretty, but since it was sort of presented without context, i just didn't have much to work with.

Another take on the little mermai...merman?

Very cute, love the art, but I don't know if there's a prequel to this or not. Either way, there's not a real plot on this one so...