Comments of Cynical dog

dude come on she’s like 15 and “good girl” irked me sm y’all don’t understand idc if she’s a hot sexy killer i don’t fw age gaps especially if one of them is a fucking MINOR???? also saying “good girl” like at all should be punishable by death

Ooooooh this is gonna be goooood

is this pedophila??

First smut gl I’ve read… don’t know what to feel~

I feel that this story could have been expanded more

Feels like porn more than a story lol

i've read this on nhen, didn't knew it was here lol also I love how she got "break" at the end <33 (oneshot)

why are you a oneshot??? UGH YOU HAVE SO MUCH POTENTIAL FOR A FULL ASS SERIES!!!

WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE SO SHORT???!!!

who ever made this deserves to get their ass ate

this b too good they beautiful af yoo

holy fucking shit this is so good but me when tho

this is hange smut story. no one can convince me otherwise

How old is she lol

TFFFFF???? THAT WAS SOOOO GOOD! NEED A FULL SERIES ASAP! PLEASE! OMG! IT'S SOOO FREAKIN GOOD. THE TOP IS SOOOO AOWMAKKW IM SHAKING RN. I WANT SOMEONE LIKE HER LMAO.