Pros: Pretty art CONS: Poor pacing, lack of personality for FL, awkward dialogue that feels robotic, no connection to any characters as everyone is super flat, FL behaves like a yoyo that contradicts herself.
Overall a very awkward read to try and get through.
24 girl and boy not dating. Boy had son with ex. Boy and girls brother are bff. Boy afraid to tell girld brother theyre dating. Girl will go home because her brother is back
CONS: Poor pacing, lack of personality for FL, awkward dialogue that feels robotic, no connection to any characters as everyone is super flat, FL behaves like a yoyo that contradicts herself.
Overall a very awkward read to try and get through.