Comments of Dokusen Kenrisho

Cute short story

I agree with some of the opinions here that the story is somewhat boring. Anyway, still I consider the story good. Thank you, Author.

Everyone hating on the least worst manga I've read on this site, all of a sudden their manga paneling experts smh

I was zoning out the entier time i read this
It just didnt do well with making me focused to the story
I think it might be related to the pacing?

It’s a good story concept but lacked a little in the smoothness of the delivery. The introduction had a “look back to when” segment that wasn’t really needed. Better to have started with their first meeting and go from there. The back in time was too recent to be relevant and gave the story a choppy flow. I liked the idea of being possessive of each other but there was no real intensity conveyed. Overall, a good read to pass some time.

Misaki loves Kiriya's posture and asked him to become a model since he works in advertisement. At first he was rejected but he kept on asking. Finally he was accepted but with the condition that Misaki has to come to the photo shoots. Kiriya is compleatley infatuated by Misak and will only be a model for the projects that Misaki is working on. He want to be closer to Misaki and wants him for himself.

Fight -sex-fight-sex........

Super cuteeeeeeeeeer

A manager for models' photoshoots and an amateur exclusive model who would only go to the photoshoot if the manager appears

Wow. Such an abrupt ending. Still cute tho.
2020.03

All in One
I don’t know if it was the translation or typesetting or what, but parts were just, off... they didn’t follow well on top of the bad grammar everywhere. Decent enough story I guess. They’re both idiots and they had the same problem over and over and over again.

The main characters are so cute<3

To quote I Thot You Was a Toad, "The artwork is gorgeous, as par for Kousaka Akiho, but the conflict arch was too shallow and short-term to keep it interesting."
My thoughts exactly... *yawn*

170 Pages

Misaki, who's working for an advertising agency falls in love at first sight with Masahiro's posture when he sees him by chance on the street. He comes up and asks him to work as a model. While working together, Misaki came to love and be possessive towards Masahiro, but one day he is suddenly kissed by Masahiro...?!

The art is beautiful but I personally don't like the story, dropped it.