Noah, a kid that I met 6 years ago in an orphanage. His closed off appearance, made me feel like I was seeing my younger self so i have to admit that I wanted to care for him more... I didn't think that he would follow me this much.
Just... Terrifying. Despite being a short story (which usually are rushed), it had a steady flow with its storyline whilst delivering heart-wrenching, violent scenes; however, the same with most of the short stories I've read, I only had one problem with this one, which is the ending.
It felt incomplete, as if there is still more to explore in the story. I feel like it would've worked better as a long story rather than being a short one. Other than that, I have no problems with the story. It had a sick and disturbing plot, memorable(?) characters, nice depiction of the effects of r@p3 and confinement on the human mind by showing how MC was manipulated into believing he's better off confined in the middle of nowhere with his captor rather than going back to his normal life (stockholm syndrome), and a nice artstyle. A solid 8.5/10 from me.
twisted as hell, but definitely was hot, 60 on the plot 40 on the smut, the smut pics had some few weird angles with weird drawinfs but it's barely noticeable so passed on. the story however, was filled with all the needed details that one could possibly ask abt the story so 4/5 huahsha
I HATED it. So much unneeded rape, and the fact that they brought religion in this makes it worse because they misuse it. Reading this was absolutely horrible.
His closed off appearance, made me feel like I was seeing my younger self so i have to admit that I wanted to care for him more...
I didn't think that he would follow me this much.
Lord, can I lead him to the right path?