im a sucker for this kind of romance; which is supernatural (human x non-human). it is bittersweet and it gave you such a heart wrenching feeling as you read and see how pure the main character's love for someone she doesn't even hear, see or touch. i could say that her love was really beyond great, it was an ideal kind of love which one couldn't stand for too long and just give up. i wish for the both of them to be truly happy even if its impossible.
Not a 2 chap story, but rather Chap 0: ver 1 & ver 2. That said, my opinion... Eh... came across a little strange, and I don't see this as being a fulfilling relationship over the long run.