The story is not bad in fact its good with logical end , but most of ppl don,t like the uke to be a player and sex lover (groupie), even thought we see semes like that all the time , Thought when the uke found himself not willing to just sleep with 2 of them and that he love the other guy , he push his brother , which logicaly gave up when he understood the situation
Good, but I think some stuff got fucked in translation. I'd like to read a better translation. Got the gist of it though, and as usual sensei's plot is great!
Damn, I was a little hurt cuz Ayumi just abandoned Takashi like that, but I wanted them together anyways. Poor Atsushi, I really wish he finds someone who he can admire way more than his brother. It's gonna be hard cuz Takashi's freaking gorgeous, but I'm sure he'll find it!!!
This dealt with so many naughty topics but in a somewhat curious, erotic and acceptable way that you can't help but like it. At first I was confused but understood partway through. Great work
Thought when the uke found himself not willing to just sleep with 2 of them and that he love the other guy , he push his brother , which logicaly gave up when he understood the situation