Comments of Heart Stop

aww^^ i want more of this^^.^^

Read this ages ago, wanna see how I would feel about it now.

Uke looks like oikawa so that's y haha. Ch3 was confusing, ch4 was frustrating, they are bound to break. No proper communication at all smh

Just okay but I like the art though.

One evening, Fukada misses his normal train stop. Upon walking home, he turns to see a man who had been following him since he left the train. The man, in shock, runs away suddenly into the night. The following day, as Fukada admires some artwork at his cafe job, the man reappears! The man, Takemodo, turns out to be the artist of the many paintings that Fukada admires so! Upon Fukada's usual train ride home, he spots Takemodo. Upon both of them departing, and one mans obviousness to follow the other home, Fukada asks "Why are you following me?". Takemodo responds "I do it because I love you". How will Fukada respond?!

the uke is kind of annoying. just letting misunderstanding happen - and he didn’t even let his partner know that he liked him, he didn’t even say it

Seems vute and innocent

It was good plot al over the place just ok
05/23/22

the plot felt a little loose but i thought it was cute

"I think having sex make you think alike" lol , it's such a light hearted yaoi , not much ses shown , simple plotline with understanding people and also I don't have to move my eyes much to look at letters since this mangaka always makes big and wide scenes in single page so it's easy to read and goes faster I liked it. To think jts written by a guy gives me best feeling me cuz unlike other female mangaka his characters are less complex and simple also puppy semes are good.

Execution isn't strong. But then again this is a pretty old manga so ayee not unexpected. The dark hair guy is laaamme; he's hella clingyyyy. I also have a pet peeve for characters confessing before they get to know each other... And this was one of those manga. Also they literally spell out for u all of their character traits so u dont really see their personalities...they just tell u....eh. Dialouge is really clunky and the "eeee cuuute!!" scenes dont really fit bc the mood is usually off. Idk man..its like when yer reading yer like "ic what u were going for there...but..ya kinda missed the mark" lol conflicts were also pretty forced

Weird plot, weird development, and I hate how the uke chose not to tell the seme about the stalker, stirring up the misunderstanding but blame the seme for doubting him?? Not that bad but not so good either, kinda meh

A lot cuter than I thought, I’ve read stories about stalking a lot less vanilla than this one ^^’

Upon walking home, he turns to see a man who had been following him since he left the train. The man, in shock, runs away suddenly into the night. The following day, as Fukada admires some artwork at his cafe job, the man reappears! The man, Takemodo, turns out to be the artist of the many paintings that Fukada admires so! Upon Fukada's usual train ride home, he spots Takemodo. Upon both of them departing, and one mans obviousness to follow the other home, Fukada asks "Why are you following me?". Takemodo responds "I do it because I love you". How will Fukada respond?!

OH HIS EX LOOKS GOOD

a lil confusing

The MC was kinda irritating but It was a nice story anyway ╮(￣▽￣)╭

One evening, Fukada misses his normal train stop. Upon walking home, he turns to see a man who had been following him since he left the train. The man, in shock, runs away suddenly into the night. The following day, as Fukada admires some artwork at his cafe job, the man reappears! The man, Takemodo, turns out to be the artist of the many paintings that Fukada admires so! Upon Fukada's usual train ride home, he spots Takemodo. Upon both of them departing, and one mans obviousness to follow the other home, Fukada asks "Why are you following me?". Takemodo responds "I do it because I love you". How will Fukada respond?!

cant tell whos seme and whos uke