Comments of Hisshou Dungeon Unei Houhou

Silver Ash

2022-12-22 02:23

Agree

Last ch 25
There isn’t enough detail for it to be a, guy running a dungeon that has massive influence over the world, type story. If they were more insular then it would be whatever but they are getting involved with all the countries. There isn’t enough porn (there hasn’t been any, only some minor implied nudity earlier on) for it to be a, there is a plot but the main focus is on this guy and his harem, type story.
Badly written story aside,
Labris is best girl and legal wife, she is a loli with massive tits.
Deriyu ranks pretty high with her fun nature and immense strength but isn’t as strong as Labris.
Elise and Ratsu don’t get enough screen time. Ratsu had more earlier on but then Labris took over majorly.
Seraria, Lulua, and Sheela are the outwardly known wives. Seraria isn’t bad, I think she’s fun and she takes care of Ashurin who is the baby of the group. Lulua got better once she learned to think things through and support herself. Sheela just got here so, I can only say that she got to kiss Yuki on screen which is more than Labris. Granted, Labris clings to Yuki, she is always in physical contact with him, in his lap, holding his hand, she was on his shoulders one time. Labris is the one who knows Yuki the best since she can literally read his mind. She’s the only one who even knows his real name is Kazuya.
Labris being great aside, there needs to be more focus on a civilization development plot or a fuck ton of nudity and porn. It won’t make up for all the meh moments but it will give the story some directive. Now that he’s going to start being physically intimate with the girls, maybe the porn will fill in the spaces of bad writing. That is, if we even get sex scenes that are longer than 2 panels. (Ch 25)