I liked the earlier version more. This version seemed to focus a lil too heavily on drama and sad realities (like your gf cheating on u with a man, getting preggers and having a shotgun wedding x_x) art and story still good but daymmmm where's the romance? The kilig? the looove?
I've been waiting for the next yuri manga from this author. Super excited to see what happens next! Office romances are the best!
Edit: This is complete on its host site, so I recommend reading the last two chapters there if you want the entire story. It was finished in 2021, though. Just fyi for those expecting updates.