Comments of Inoribana

wow! it's actually good!! if this ever continues,I think his adventure to bring back hiyodori will be something not to be missed out!!! XDD

Liked how the plot contrasted the art, and it wasn't just fluff. I just felt that if it were longer, it would've been better as it could've developed the plot and feelings better. It happened a little too fast for the feelings to really sink in.