This seems so cool. Im excited to read Update: I read chapter 1, to me it seemed a little bit fast paced. Iwish there the test was more in depth and a little longer and I hope we get to see more in depth what happened to our mc. Ill update when ive read to chapter 5. Still like it so far tho, just a little fast paced.
Update: Im not up to chapter 5 and I dont think I'll read to chapter 5 its so fast paced to the point that its boring. During their first mission I wouldve like to see more flash backs of our mc and how he relates to the little girl. I wouldve like to see them investigating the villagers and helping the little girl overcome her issue and tell them what happened and them while she tells them the monster comes out. There was so much potential
