The main story's good, not a masterpiece at all, just some quick fun reading. Also, If you're wondering about the ch5 that lots of commenters are talking about, it's a psychological one-shot, not a BL at all but it's still smut coz of the h-scene between MC x rando dude.
*Spoilers**
MC fell in love with his brother as a kid, big bro understandably took this as a joke and eventually got himself married, but lil bro was dead serious so off he went and underwent plastic surgery to make himself look like big bro, then he'd look at himself (his bro's face) in the mirror and jerk off to that; he eventually finds randos to have seggs with all so he can delude himself that the person being f'd up is his bro and it's him doing the f'ing. It's messed up but plot execution for this fetish was pretty good for me, it wasn't romanticized and I feel pretty bad for both brothers, specially the older one (lil one really needs therapy and fast)
It was all cute and everything… then I got ambushed by that incest chapter 5 which killed the momentum of my cutesy read…. I’m severely traumatized … my entire being wasn’t ready for that psychological attack
Ágæt saga eeeen excuse meee hvaða fkn saga var þetta í kafla 5 for no reason? geggjað krúttuð saga um skólastráka og svo bara boom incest síðan aftur í hina söguna bara excuse me i need to go wash my eyes and touch some grass for a bit
My rating: 5/10 It was funny, but also kind of weird. The seme was blunt to a point where it got awkward and really obsessed with the uke. It's also not just comedy as a real stalker appears later on. Beware of the side story, it was disturbing.
TRAIN, SMELL, STALKER In order to find the guy who helped him escape a smelly train a year ago, the seme chose his high school. But when he encounters a guy who smells just like his saviour, that student's friend always gets in the way.
