tht reminds me when i used to write very detailed stories in my notes when i was 12 too… now all i write is utter rubbish and unfunny nonsense on a fricking yaoi website hoping i’ll look back on it and laugh. The other thing that bothered me is that guys eyes that took up Almost half of the screen im sorru but please back away before i do something like the guy did to the judge. Jesus Fricking. Ugh it was nice. Nice plot. Interesting really. When’s the next chapter ? Or must i send an email aswell ?