The plot was very easy to understand, actually. I really enjoyed this and I think it deserves a better rating! Friends to enemies to lovers sorta? I’m satisfied.
This actually is quite sweet. Short, yes. Could it have been fleshed out? Maybe, but then would it have been as good of a read? Who knows. Javier is a bit of a dick but hey, everyone has flaws. It was really just a front for his emotions anyway.
nahh the story was too short to have some character development. the seme just suddenly was inlove with the uke after being a big jerk to him. He hates gays but willingly sucks dick, arse.
Eh, it was alright. I like that they both loved each other since the very beginning. They really confused the words each person said but oh well that’s a misunderstanding for you. I just feel like it needed more; it was to short. Also the way they confessed to each other was like out of nowhere; there was no conflict.
IT WAS SO SHORT honestly what felt really off for me was in ch 14(?) when keyar (?) assaulted him but then suddenly at the next chapter it didn't even explain what happened after??? like did he leave him alone? did someone interrupted them? how he was able to leave the place???? so many questions and it wasn't just on this particular scene, throughout the whole story there were a few confusing things. Overall, i think i understood the ending quite a bit tho idk lol i teared up a bit
