Comments of Koibito no Hirakikata

Chapter 5 couple needs to communicate more. The uke didn't confront the seme about the girl he's with. A d the seme didn't tell him anything, and he lies going to his parents house.

Aoi Kujou works are very soft eevn though these are created by a man but still i feel butterflies in my stomach while reading his works it's also good with good communication but i can feel faded in phase of story but it's really good and light hearted stuff.

The story line has potential but there was so much missed here that could have been expanded on.

How about an explanation on how Uke2 and Uke3 were dating if Uke3 and Seme3 were together for so long?

How about answering the infidelity issue instead of glossing it over with shallow words and insincerities?

How about diving more into the impulses of Seme2 and Uke2?

How about giving more details to Seme1 and Uke1?

The stories are, as many said, super vague and lacking real emotion in favor of surface platitudes and telling us that they are happy rather than showing us they are happy.

Just like 2nd and 3th story..

Ok 1 thing I don't understand is -
Natsuki and the art teacher had been dating since Natsuki was in high school.
Then how can Sena and Natsuki be dating while Natsuki started working? Did I miss something?

Not much off a fan i read cuz of the student teacher one, but what was that?! It was never explained who that woman was and why he was bringing her to his parents house. And the uke never asked about it. Meh

1) Meguro gets reunited with his ex boyfriend, Shouei, at work. Shouei use to be in a band and was very popular which made Meguro anxious but Shouei quit the band to spend time with Meguro and that made him feel like he was robbing Shouei of his dreams, so he ended their relationship.
2-3,6) Sena broke up with Natsuki who did not love him but instead of getting his belongings from sena, he sent his friend, Sakurai to fetch them. However, Sena and Sakurai got along with one another.
4,5) High schooler Natsuki fell in love with the substitute art teacher, Ichikawa, who noticed Natsuki's feelings.

Ch 4 and 5: What? Where is the love for the uke? Why did artist not communicate about moving studio? Who was that woman? Why did none of the answers to uke's questions answered? I feel like the artist didn't actually love his partner properly. Why didn't the uke ask any questions? In the end, it left more unanswered questions and a feeling of anger in me. Romance is about sharing your lives, not just sex!!! I want another chapter that clears up all the misunderstandings! I hurt for the uke!

Chapter 2, 3 n 6
So cute and awesome
Past relationships

Multiple Story it was okay

It was really good, I liked the stories, alot of them interlock! Definitely one I want to read again!

averageee hahahah very vague xD liked the second story, wanted a one shot with Sena's kouhai (Oumi, from the second story). The other stories need to be longer so we could understand better the characters
Well, average and not to re-read xD

Copulation of cute love stories

It's a cute story, but not wauw

So first of all I LOVED THIS! I wish the first story was longer. I wish Sena's story was it's own whole volume! Him and his seme were the freakin cutest! I am kinda confused by Natsuki's story... I mean was his seme cheating? Who was that chick?? I was so upset when I seen that! But the last little chapter was extra cute! Loved it all!