I think Mameiha (in the comments) pointed out a lot of flaws about the first story, it's so unforgivable of the seme. But I do find him kneeling on the streets kind of touching (doesn't dismiss his actions, but it's so satisfying), especially when a lot of semes in BL don't make up for their mistakes.
Im giving this a 7. I don't like how forgiving the guy was in the first story. Is his boyfriend going to keep lending money from their savings? Why lie about meeting up with the friend?
First Story: Issie, a hotel concierge employee is in a relationship with a part-time restaurant/baker? worker.. Thier dream is to sail the world - actually it is Issie's dream but his partner our of love wants to follow him anywhere and everywhere, so they pour their savings into a joint account! The problem is that a significant portion of their account has disagreed and Issie is lying about to where and why he is giving the money away without informing his partner! I'm in love with the potential of this story but I loath the execution, it is very rushed and lacks a good editor! A couple who have been living together for 2 years and don't go out because they want to save their money, So they spend all their free time togather.. Don't they talk!! Is the only thing that is in their mind is to have sex!! What a doomed relationship!
The second one: 2 people meet and only one of them realizes that he is bullied by that person during high school. So he plans for revenge!
Not one of my favs. Cute short stour and such but not much of a storyline wish it was longer and what not. The sex scenes are short and you don't see much. But still a cute light hearted drama filled romance here.
