Comments of Lay Me to Sleep!

It was so… short. But I liked it! The premise made this a fun read… The MC dreaming abt getting fucked in his dreams is a new one. A bit predictable, but not bad. It was really funny. I liked how deadpan and honest the leads were with each other.

OKAYY THIS WAS GOOD.. I LOVE BL WITH THIS ART STYLE N PLOT(AS IF IT EVEN HAS A PLOT LOLL).. BUT ITS SOO SHORT... DAMN

the plot kinda reminds me of Koi wa Ina Mono Myouna Mono

Pretty characters good

Finished at ch.21 (end)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I don’t like their dynamic

TAGS: business men, SEME FELL IN LOVE FIRST, straight uke, pining seme, jealous seme, insomnia

plot - 4/5
i rly love plots where sex is a solution to solve their problems like how the bottom needs to have sex with his top to solve his insomnia lmao

art - 4/5
the expressions r drawn weirdly sometimes but the SEX......THE SEX WAS DRAWN PERFECTLY!!!!!!!!

smut - 5/5

simp seme meter - 4/5
fulff simp but he got jealous over a dildo LOL

enjoyment - 4/5

overall: 4/5

I wish I'd have the same dreams but no, all I get are nonsensical dreams

12 sept 2023 - 5/10

This was so good! Simple, but sweet. Also surprisingly healthy, with lots of communication.