Comments of Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha - Kiss x Kiss x Kiss (Doujinshi)

The art needs work. There's really no story, just moments of the yuri couple. But it's lacking and very stereotypical. Nothing stands out. It's meant to be cute but the moments don't give enough of that yuri spark to it. I can see the author tried to make something but there is more work that needs to be done. Don't give up.