Comments of Makimodoshi No Koi No Uta

Really good. Might be because fl has twintails and is lowkey tsundere and I'm into that *shrug*
Also, I didn't hate her ex bf, better accept those feelings sooner than later. Imagine he dated fl for years when still in love with his ex and then one day a divorced ex gf appears, we would have entered in the major league of drama here, with cheating and other nasty tags. So I'm glad they ended it here, before all that drama could happen.

The extra part is good thought

DRAMA
Minoru is Riko's first boyfriend and first love, but to Minoru, Riko is his second girlfriend. Even worse, it seems that Minoru still cares an awful lot about his ex,whose sister actually goes to the same school as them and Minoru is behaving strangely meeting Mikami in secret to talk.. And the Biggest blow came to him when he hears she getting married on Sunday!! Hearing about the ex-girlfriend and the wedding has effected the both will they work through this trial or will they be lost? And why did Sakashita have to see what happen.. Mikima tells Minoru her sisters wedding is off and Riko goes to apologize to Sakashita for shouting and he turns around and kisses her!! And Riko's surprise Sakashita is in the same cafe surrounded by girls and another surprise Minoru is introducing Riko to his ex-girlfriend?? Riko's been avoiding Minoru after school But, Why? is he so up-set not being informed when his ex went missing their arguing about Riko and his ex in front of her why don't they see how up-set she is or does Minoru even care? Riko has made her decision on what she has to do she goes to Minoru and says "Let's Break-Up" it's for the best.. But,the next day passing in the hall Minoru says he doesn't accept it but,they don't need each other they each have another more important..

First story is decent, though the ending was a bit pre-cut, It's like they added an extra chapter to extend it but instead left questions.
Second story is cute, it'd been better if it had at least one other chapter, but the characters weren't terrible.

iTs interesting....

Minoru is Riko's first boyfriend and he considers Riko and his ex and both evenly important. Riko is a very insecure girl, and ends up in a mess. But, in all of her troubles another guy shows up and see trough everything that she seems to be thinking.
The last chapter is a oneshot that includes a love between high school neighbors, a very popular guy, and a girl that thinks he is cruel person for dumping love letters in the trash.