I rather liked the story, but the ML gave me a royal pain. He was immediately attracted to the FL, but had the juvenile boy's trick of only belittling her and criticizing her. Instead of telling her that he found her interesting or adorable, his whole communication, other than criticism, was "I want you" and "I desire you." In other words, "I'm horny and want to have sex and you're the only woman here at the moment." About as romantic as a porn flick or someone talking about grabbing them by the @&**%.
