@26 The plot never makes sense to me, it jumps around so much. Like how did it go from MC telling ML they wont be friends next year, to ML revealing his age, running after MC, going on a car date and fcking??? The story has some great smut, but the plot is a mess and confusing at times. Just read it for smut cause the rest is a mess
7+8 = hot
9 = why would anyone think THAT is a good idea to say?! Pls the MC sounded like an ass here
13-18 = HOT AF. Tho I do not understand how exactly this made sense plot wise? How did the ML revealing his age cause of thisl?
20+21 = hot + cyte outfits
22-24 = sad chapters. And the ML still is mad the MC was saying hed abandon him, which also is the confusing part for me like how d u go from that to sex the next day lol. Anyway, ML deserves better parents, glad his brother is good.
25+26 = THE MC MAKES NO SENSE I SWEAR! Someone asks what secret youre hiding , and you say we eont be friends next year and shit talk them. Then fck em the next day. Then later you help them from surviving a panic attack about their dead parent, and literally live together, ans just 1 single DAY after ALL THAT, you say you wanna leave the house and wont see the ML that often after highschool? Pls he comes across as a douchebag so often cause he says the worst things at the most ridiculous times. It doesnt eveb make sense why you would say that TODAY of all days?
Okay so I started reading this but for some reason the writing just doesn't make the story intriguing. The characters also feel very bland somehow. I also have a hard time finding ANY appealing quality in the 'love interest' of the MC.
Not a very good combo for a comic in my opinion. Which is a shame since I'm running out of stuff to read while updates take ages to roll in. XD
