No. It's not good enough. I want to see the Chef's face. Where did the shopkeeper go? Ugh. The bad thing about one shots is that they have too many loose ends.
But I loved it. It's mellow, in a sense. Its nostalgic. I remember eating at a restaurant all the time during my childhood. Now that restaurant has shut down. Thats the type of nostalgia I am talking about. It's hard to portray that vague feeling so well. I liked it.