Comments of Outburst

I'm usually forgivable but this one makes my head spin. Too many times. I'll try my best not to spoil too much if you want to actually read it.
















Lets start with this, out of all the characters, by far the one that was *supposed* to be the main character (as assumed by the cover) had the least amount of screentime if you could compare it with everyone else within the main cast, Eugene, was the only one with actually good characteristics that I can get behind on. The other characters... Not so much. Nagi could've been okay in my opinion but the plain SA was not it. Tito, was messy (not as messy as Simone, of course, but we'll get to that later.) in terms of character and development (which I've so far seen............none.). And Simone, who I can write a whole essay about how much I dislike Simone's character but to put it simply, I could describe it as a Garbage Truck going to a thousand loops on an unfinished roller coaster ride.

Really, Eugene was the only character I somewhat liked but he wasn't at all fleshed out properly, majority of the scenes where we do interact with him is just through smut; The whole manwha is a good example of showing and not telling about a character's driving plot because it just ends with something feeling like there's something missing. I'm really holding onto that 'Ongoing' tag like one of those 'Divorces leaves children in the worst places' meme but as I've seen in the ending it would probably just be an abandoned translation work or some other reuploader just puts the official translations of the current chapters available on it.

The Plot... The concept is nice, I like it personally but the pacing in said plot just doesn't do it justice. The pacing was terribly slow at the start and incredibly rushed at the end so by the finale, you don't get the satisfaction of the concept of 'And they lived happily ever after' from a good ending in a story. It just feels forced. and confusing.

Overall, I like the art. And thats the best compliment I could give it. I rate it a 1.5/5 stars.

Didn’t like the story, seme is annoying

i hated everyone except eugene

I don't like the story

(speechless)

idk if it's the translation but the dialogue is confusing af. not a fan of simone, don't understand the hype with tito (i got second hand embarrassment from his "interest in japan"), eugene's hotness carried my will to read on.

ugly ass art

Lol Simone chooses his jobs purely based on the job of the person he loves

Want: 2024-01-21 19:26
Reading: 2024-01-21 20:32

spy for mafia for revenge, fucking superior - ch 7

Really good story and I actually cared about the characters for once.

One nitpick is I was so hoping nagi was gonna bottom cuz he’s hot.

But shit, I have a giant crush on Eugene.

DNF @ch7 pg59. Not bad story. Just felt it wasn’t going in direction I normally enjoy

I am in love with uke character Eugene - he is bold, sharp, manly and hot. And he place his trust into people he love and treat them sincerely without lies. And i hate seme character in this webtoon. If he already chose his brother's side and abandoned uke, he should have just stick to it till the end. What was that ridiculous confession at the last chapter about not being able to catch uke? If i were in uke's shoes, i would feel humiliated by it.

I am really dissapointed with the ending of the story. It would be much more realistic, if Eugene was shot or imprisoned, Nagi was also put in prison, Simone confessed once again to Tito and was firmly turned down and was left without any hope, and Tito was the only person unswayed by all this events.

Triggers:
murder
gangsters
revenge
manipulation
past trauma
possessive lover
Psychological
Action / Romance / Yaoi / Webtoons / Smut
Action, interesting, smut, drama, yakuza, yaoi,
Slightly confusing, but easy to grasp, lots of twists the ml appears confused and conflicted about whom he's in love with. Revenge for what a murdering ganster did to his senior whom he appears to love. But his entanglement with the murderer is complicated for him, looks like it's going to be an interesting story with a lot of sex lol
25+

Bad art, shitty plot

pretty ok, not bad at all