I really feel as if the author was limited to 50 chapters. There was so much potential here, if only the crevices in the plot could have been explored further, if only the author had sat with their characters a bit more. It definitely feels like the work of an amateur, but that does not mean it was bad. With a few revisions and a bit more time, this could become a great, great story.
Very good story with a lot of character development and beautiful artwork. It would be yet better if it went more into detail here and there, but in my opinion it's still very enjoyable.
Why are we Inferior? Why are we beneath you? "Is it because we look different? Why can we not live amongst everyone else? Why are we not considered the same as everyone else? What have we done wrong for the entire world to turn its back on us? What have we done wrong for you all to scorn us? Since the day we are born, we are pushed down to lick your feet. Since the day we are born, we are punished for living. And since the day we were born, we are put beneath even beasts. You lashed our backs, violated our mothers tortured out fathers, killed our brethren. All because we are different from you. Yes, I turned into a monster. Yes, I became a killer. Yes, I murdered men. But is that not what the world did to my people? You only become outraged when it’s your people on the receiving end of violence? You deem me a monster but you are my creator. We are the people cast away by the gods. We are the people of tears. We are a people who can never smile. We are a people forgotten. I am the product of your hatred and violence. Hate me not, but hate yourself. For you are the nohr, not I."
Drama / Fantasy / Romance
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